Story Board (Detailed), Backgrounds

These are story boards of a short story adaptation for a short film pitch - Included are some of the directors sketches of which I translated into the following...

Trying hard to make up for time wasted in college - relearning perspective/backgrounds - Used crow-quill and some ink washes.
One should always keep in mind where the light source is and the weight of your line based on the make of an object and its action.

*Update - The pitch has been denied by the author - "The storyboards were fantastic. The only problem is that I am developing !@#$% for TV at the moment, and also that Ben Stiller's company is working on !@#$%."